1. First failure — friendly heads-up
Day 0, within minutes of the decline
Subject
Your payment to {business} didn't go through
A/B alternates
- • Quick fix needed: your {business} payment failed
- • {first_name}, your card was declined
Hi {first_name},
We tried to charge {amount} for your {business} subscription today, but your card was declined. This is almost always something small — an expired card, a temporary bank block, or not quite enough in the account at that moment.
You can fix it in a few seconds with the secure link below. Nothing changes on your account in the meantime.
[ Update payment method → {update_url} ]
We'll try again automatically, so if you sort it out on your side there's nothing else to do.
Thanks, The {business} team